tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post4211839333459549602..comments2023-10-11T08:54:40.442-05:00Comments on Unedited: Tuesday TwistAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-51070522179630754492010-11-10T21:04:47.515-06:002010-11-10T21:04:47.515-06:00#3 is my fav- very intriguing! Love those first l...#3 is my fav- very intriguing! Love those first lines, and it hooks us right away. Thanks for sharing!!Abby Minardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963640263845561309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-32420851029121663152010-11-09T23:24:11.555-06:002010-11-09T23:24:11.555-06:00Love love love all three of them, but I think #3 i...Love love love all three of them, but I think #3 is my fave! Isn't it funny how we all have different favorites??? CONGRATS on being soooo close to 1000!!Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-3405476917381190452010-11-09T23:10:18.329-06:002010-11-09T23:10:18.329-06:00I like all three, but really love the first one. S...I like all three, but really love the first one. So intriguing!Emy Shinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109925009902220083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-56806612561492527212010-11-09T22:33:22.305-06:002010-11-09T22:33:22.305-06:00#2 is my favorite because it's a truism that y...#2 is my favorite because it's a truism that you will need to prove. The line pulls me into the story.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00511147911400797398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-50044904624722746282010-11-09T21:43:32.073-06:002010-11-09T21:43:32.073-06:00Love, love, LOVE the first one!Love, love, LOVE the first one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-84734996029171834682010-11-09T19:51:49.377-06:002010-11-09T19:51:49.377-06:00Cool. You tell us enough to whet our appetites and...Cool. You tell us enough to whet our appetites and leave us wanting more.<br />CDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12160669603997465454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-18227405118322757332010-11-09T18:41:15.456-06:002010-11-09T18:41:15.456-06:00I feel invisible all the time - but, I have a feel...I feel invisible all the time - but, I have a feeling it might be literal in your story? :) GREAT lines!<br /><br />I'll share - here's the first line to my Nano project:<br /><br />"I kidnapped a boy when I was seven-years-old." <br /><br />I think it might be a keeper!Donea Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15393184831994368021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-69358218182364104862010-11-09T18:06:08.641-06:002010-11-09T18:06:08.641-06:00The other two really are terrific, but that first ...The other two really are terrific, but that first line is pure gold!Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-77245126706395397462010-11-09T15:57:16.148-06:002010-11-09T15:57:16.148-06:00I LOVE the first one!I LOVE the first one!Mariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-90193709617567354582010-11-09T14:56:26.415-06:002010-11-09T14:56:26.415-06:00Nice lines. Last night I wrote, "Some choices...Nice lines. Last night I wrote, "Some choices are impossible." And I kinda liked it.Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-80520828592070061202010-11-09T14:39:36.616-06:002010-11-09T14:39:36.616-06:00I love the first one too. It reminds me of a Lao T...I love the first one too. It reminds me of a Lao Tsu quote regarding leadership:<br /><br />...As for the best leaders, the people do not notice their existence. The next best, the people honour and praise. The next, the people fear; and the next, the people hate ... When the best leader's work is done the people say, 'We did it ourselves!'"Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-2484950767792709742010-11-09T14:06:26.647-06:002010-11-09T14:06:26.647-06:00Oh I love them all. If I had to pick a favorite......Oh I love them all. If I had to pick a favorite... #2.Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-57768001738870704522010-11-09T13:53:47.584-06:002010-11-09T13:53:47.584-06:00Yay, thanks for sharing! I LOVE the first one!
Al...Yay, thanks for sharing! I LOVE the first one!<br /><br />Also, I can't believe Harry Potter is out in 9 days. Ahhh!Krispyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492607213249874138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-89297646848531477022010-11-09T13:37:26.347-06:002010-11-09T13:37:26.347-06:00Thanks for sharing Jen!
I love them! Each and eve...Thanks for sharing Jen!<br /><br />I love them! Each and everyone. You know a thing or two about strong first lines my friend.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-69132219489575543972010-11-09T12:49:31.201-06:002010-11-09T12:49:31.201-06:00Love these lines! The second one is my favorite.Love these lines! The second one is my favorite.Terry Stonecrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726985400500572770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-25873854192100592342010-11-09T12:44:12.496-06:002010-11-09T12:44:12.496-06:00I love the line about being invisible. Awesome!
T...I love the line about being invisible. Awesome!<br /><br />Thanks for the plug on my contest. <br /><br />Love your blog! My blog wants to be like yours when it grows up.Rebecca Talleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01969923131001170254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-17658035159654525652010-11-09T12:41:24.038-06:002010-11-09T12:41:24.038-06:00"Somebody really should have told me you can&..."Somebody really should have told me you can't always get what you want. I mean, I know the saying is out there, but when you get to twenty-three and have gotten almost everything you really wanted - it starts to feel like it was said for someone else." <br /><br />Love yours, thanks for sharing!Jolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14809468564016928636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-35927917519723399842010-11-09T12:26:32.587-06:002010-11-09T12:26:32.587-06:00I love the first one too! This is a great twist to...I love the first one too! This is a great twist to read from your own stories!Rose Cooperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11848631652522951216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-18619222713409665982010-11-09T12:10:27.932-06:002010-11-09T12:10:27.932-06:00I like the first one, too! Good stuff!
Hope you&#...I like the first one, too! Good stuff!<br /><br />Hope you'e having a fantastic Tuesday!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-3591179325685315342010-11-09T11:58:11.924-06:002010-11-09T11:58:11.924-06:00That first line is so good! It immediately made me...That first line is so good! It immediately made me want to read on.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-79346724602776982752010-11-09T10:54:20.049-06:002010-11-09T10:54:20.049-06:00Ooooh how cool! <3 the first.Ooooh how cool! <3 the first.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01737620211363427992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-35036917705370437682010-11-09T10:40:07.582-06:002010-11-09T10:40:07.582-06:00Go writing week!!! Those are awesome 1st lines! =D...Go writing week!!! Those are awesome 1st lines! =DCarolyn V.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15456210036213016603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-46477992026318947412010-11-09T10:28:54.120-06:002010-11-09T10:28:54.120-06:00Great choices Jen!! I look forward to these all we...Great choices Jen!! I look forward to these all week!Jillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04185423759021869130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-61799949242360788842010-11-09T10:12:59.994-06:002010-11-09T10:12:59.994-06:00Love the first. Great choices!!
The counter looks...Love the first. Great choices!! <br />The counter looks fantastic up there!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-2547973816151720282010-11-09T10:05:35.535-06:002010-11-09T10:05:35.535-06:00Number 1 is great! And, number 2 follows closely b...Number 1 is great! And, number 2 follows closely behind. <br /><br />BTW, I gave you an award on my blog.Basthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12561466241112288690noreply@blogger.com