tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post1949857930951018703..comments2023-10-11T08:54:40.442-05:00Comments on Unedited: the writing gameAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-56846562097746293082010-03-09T10:39:01.396-06:002010-03-09T10:39:01.396-06:00she hadn't thrown it off to distract her chase...she hadn't thrown it off to distract her chasers. Now, she was running through the allys with the rain soaking her body. Luke saw an opportunity and..........Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373118546643541460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-23153808976122446742010-03-06T01:34:19.858-06:002010-03-06T01:34:19.858-06:00Shadows seemed to come to life as she streaked thr...Shadows seemed to come to life as she streaked through the alley. The pounding of feet couldn't keep up with the drumming of her heart. She quickly realized her plaid outfit would be perfect camouflage... if only...Flannel Cape Movie Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13713750841146403105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-14949907731035130442010-03-04T15:56:18.322-06:002010-03-04T15:56:18.322-06:00"Leave the change! I dont really care about a..."Leave the change! I dont really care about a parking ticket right now!! Go!" He screamed as he watched her get out and run down the dark ally that sat adjacent to them.missivysparklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08505568734061529825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-62095788382296801422010-03-04T12:56:42.381-06:002010-03-04T12:56:42.381-06:00As quickly as she could, Rebecca gathered up as mu...As quickly as she could, Rebecca gathered up as much change as she could while Luke fought off those chasing them.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373118546643541460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-36911001792852418172010-03-04T10:16:57.254-06:002010-03-04T10:16:57.254-06:00Rebecca turned around in time to see another black...Rebecca turned around in time to see another black car skid to a stop in front of them. Luke spun the steering wheel to the right, sending the car swerving onto the sidewalk where it crashed into a parking meter.Susan Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02433408456603462774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-56897063936308178682010-03-04T08:10:07.135-06:002010-03-04T08:10:07.135-06:00Luke turned and looked her in the eyes and she sud...Luke turned and looked her in the eyes and she suddenly realized what.......suddenly there was silence.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373118546643541460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-9220862573714065102010-03-03T23:57:03.885-06:002010-03-03T23:57:03.885-06:00The sun was bright, it was a beautiful day. She t...The sun was bright, it was a beautiful day. She thought it ironic given the events that had unfolded. She glanced down just in time to see Luke run a red light. "Put your seatbelt on!" he ordered. With shaking hands she fumbled to obey. Her eyes widened when she noticed the black car that was trailing them from behind. <br /><br />"Who are they!?" she asked, her heart beating out of her chest.Ashley Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17474790366358568219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-89717349093925544732010-03-03T22:49:50.179-06:002010-03-03T22:49:50.179-06:00She grinned in reply and gripped him tightly.
Her...She grinned in reply and gripped him tightly.<br /><br />Her body bounced against his shoulder as he hurried towards his Jeep.<br /><br />She heard the shrieks just as he swung open the door. <br /><br />"Get down!" He ordered as he put her in the passenger seat. He moved to jump in and started the engine. It roared to life. <br /><br />As he threw it into gear she glanced towards the sky.Courtney Barr - The Southern Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14455508477182984039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-72840774861067331572010-03-03T21:31:01.028-06:002010-03-03T21:31:01.028-06:00-I love this you guys!! Keep it going!!!--I love this you guys!! Keep it going!!!-Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-52226675533529640742010-03-03T21:28:17.232-06:002010-03-03T21:28:17.232-06:00"Honey," he said, "this isn't r..."Honey," he said, "this isn't really the place for this kind of conversation. You should save it for later... when we're alone."<br /><br />(sorry, that's just the first thing that popped into my head)Michelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-82962737388062025762010-03-03T21:23:50.994-06:002010-03-03T21:23:50.994-06:00She smiled seductively. "Did you see what I&#...She smiled seductively. "Did you see what I'm wearing under this skirt?"kahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-58816183381800339212010-03-03T17:12:51.991-06:002010-03-03T17:12:51.991-06:00"I can't," Luke says. "They are..."I can't," Luke says. "They are on their way now and they know your secret."<br /><br />She gasped, horrified.<br /><br />He carried her out the door, everyone watching as they fled.<br /><br />"Oh, and that plaid skirt is killer," he snickered. "Where did you get it from, Old-ladies-R-Us?"<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Jen - This was so much fun!!!Kimberly Franklinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13957037411750752950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-4655952086747740282010-03-03T17:00:47.804-06:002010-03-03T17:00:47.804-06:00She felt like one of those cartoons where the cave...She felt like one of those cartoons where the caveman drags the woman off by her hair.<br /><br />"PUT ME DOWN!"Bish Denhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13359927719391990534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-21018353161421390032010-03-03T16:21:15.883-06:002010-03-03T16:21:15.883-06:00Suddenly, without warning, Luke grabbed her hand a...Suddenly, without warning, Luke grabbed her hand and threw her over his shoulder.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373118546643541460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-92144661971223060412010-03-03T15:41:57.602-06:002010-03-03T15:41:57.602-06:00Luke was still standing by the table when the wait...Luke was still standing by the table when the waitress said "He can't help you. No one can."Mariah Irvinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15181111151756005743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-8938052969688008782010-03-03T15:39:37.776-06:002010-03-03T15:39:37.776-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.Mariah Irvinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15181111151756005743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-7982513253341287872010-03-03T13:11:41.052-06:002010-03-03T13:11:41.052-06:00"Oh, just having some coffee before work.&quo..."Oh, just having some coffee before work." She said quickly, she turned to the waitress "black please." Rebecca held her breath, hoping that the strange woman would go back into the kitchen and forget about the note under her quivering hand.Ashley Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17474790366358568219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-4424688203415489292010-03-03T12:15:57.343-06:002010-03-03T12:15:57.343-06:00Rebecca peered down at the note she had pressed to...Rebecca peered down at the note she had pressed to the table with the palm of her hand. Please, don't let him see me. Please. <br /><br />But with the coffee shop virtually empty, of course it was only a matter of seconds before he stood at the table.<br /><br />"Uhh, hey. What are you doing here?" He looked at her, his blue eyes lighting up her soul. <br /><br />Rebecca crinkled up the paper and smiled.ali crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13023009704454279645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-10755432271399735902010-03-03T10:39:59.847-06:002010-03-03T10:39:59.847-06:00And then, at the worst possible moment ever, with ...And then, at the worst possible moment ever, with her dressed in plaid from head to toe, the same thing she wore last time they were together,<i>he</i> walked in.Jessica L. Brooks (coffeelvnmom)https://www.blogger.com/profile/17524862571932528710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-83063329466203951002010-03-03T10:03:05.377-06:002010-03-03T10:03:05.377-06:00"She glanced down at her skirt and realized. ..."She glanced down at her skirt and realized. She was wearing plaid in the middle of summer."<br /><br />Okay, not great, but I'm still a little tired. =) So fun! Thanks Jen!Carolyn V.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15456210036213016603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-48978614718674911792010-03-03T09:47:21.299-06:002010-03-03T09:47:21.299-06:00-You guys are brilliant keep it up!--You guys are brilliant keep it up!-Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-14472437537263830762010-03-03T09:18:43.173-06:002010-03-03T09:18:43.173-06:00She held her breath in fear of what the waitress w...She held her breath in fear of what the waitress would say next.Anastasia V. Pergakishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350626962513824401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-6670882393376167392010-03-03T09:07:35.357-06:002010-03-03T09:07:35.357-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anastasia V. Pergakishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350626962513824401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-18372642005577539482010-03-03T08:54:17.985-06:002010-03-03T08:54:17.985-06:00Cheeks flushed, she took a deep breath. Slightly s...Cheeks flushed, she took a deep breath. Slightly stuttering over her own words, she whispered, "Not now."Kelly Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15385808707014108678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-41286226313561461782010-03-03T08:44:41.508-06:002010-03-03T08:44:41.508-06:00"I know your little secret," the waitres..."I know your little secret," the waitress whispered across the table, but the words echoed throughout the coffee shop and deep into Rebbecca's heart, "and there is only one thing we can do about it."Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04118951467821396698noreply@blogger.com