tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post8643668189184873859..comments2023-10-11T08:54:40.442-05:00Comments on Unedited: Fairy Tale BlogfestAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comBlogger58125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-75530978158676055722010-09-03T01:09:13.263-05:002010-09-03T01:09:13.263-05:00Great job! You're very talented! :)Great job! You're very talented! :)Amy Holderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12883850323559851866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-15907658750414071352010-08-31T16:54:27.880-05:002010-08-31T16:54:27.880-05:00Wow, what a great variation. You had me hooked fr...Wow, what a great variation. You had me hooked from Word One. And loved the circularity with the rose at the beginning and the end.Kittie Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07756250649095903317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-79473505601815315282010-08-31T12:14:53.071-05:002010-08-31T12:14:53.071-05:00Love this variation, scary!Love this variation, scary!Terry Stonecrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726985400500572770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-10641832633180465772010-08-31T10:54:53.812-05:002010-08-31T10:54:53.812-05:00Oh Jen, this is great, love your version of the fa...Oh Jen, this is great, love your version of the fairytale!! ;))Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-83402283039611280472010-08-31T08:34:51.968-05:002010-08-31T08:34:51.968-05:00Oh my goodness, this is amazing! Beauty and the Be...Oh my goodness, this is amazing! Beauty and the Beast is my fave fairy tale, but you've made it so horrifying--in the best possible sense :) I love that she sees the rose at the end. Awesome job!Meredithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00462382909938737612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-72269307117472835182010-08-31T05:26:53.356-05:002010-08-31T05:26:53.356-05:00That's pretty cool. If it goes up I'll be ...That's pretty cool. If it goes up I'll be sure to vote for ya ;o)Jessica Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889900730906728317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-51844477725088528702010-08-31T01:23:05.007-05:002010-08-31T01:23:05.007-05:00What's not to love? I'm sure you'll b...What's not to love? I'm sure you'll be in the top five.<br /><br />this was awesome.<br /><br />.........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-9216424097216316712010-08-31T00:47:10.795-05:002010-08-31T00:47:10.795-05:00Oh, poor Belle. Most definitely different from th...Oh, poor Belle. Most definitely different from the original. Nice circularity with the rose at the beginning and the end.Ishta Mercuriohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17776946702988283453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-76433547658831676162010-08-31T00:15:42.963-05:002010-08-31T00:15:42.963-05:00Jen, I love this! It's so real and scary. You ...Jen, I love this! It's so real and scary. You gave me chills with how he turned into a crazed psychopath.<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-38970939747869941692010-08-30T22:06:11.978-05:002010-08-30T22:06:11.978-05:00OMGoodness...That was great, in an awful way.
A f...OMGoodness...That was great, in an awful way.<br /><br />A friend of mine just sold one of these types of stories as a pb manuscript....<br /><br />Nice job!Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-7046621264422466702010-08-30T21:46:38.952-05:002010-08-30T21:46:38.952-05:00Ditto what every one else said. Great, poor, dark,...Ditto what every one else said. Great, poor, dark, and more. I would like to add, if it continues maybe they'll end up on the Dr. Phil show. 'How to handle the beast in your man.'<br />Nancy<br /><a href="http://nrwilliams.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">N. R. Williams, fantasy author</a>N. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-89509630322710400482010-08-30T21:16:23.769-05:002010-08-30T21:16:23.769-05:00Beauty and the Beast is my favorite fairy tale! L...Beauty and the Beast is my favorite fairy tale! Love the darkness, what a great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-64497664796266005642010-08-30T21:01:00.226-05:002010-08-30T21:01:00.226-05:00Creepy story, and great climax...lovely story, Jen...Creepy story, and great climax...lovely story, Jen.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-56256611284002196212010-08-30T20:10:22.279-05:002010-08-30T20:10:22.279-05:00So dramatic! This is definitely my kind of fairy t...So dramatic! This is definitely my kind of fairy tale. ;]<br /><br />I especially liked this: "I was bound against a force larger than my own."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-57085914912648695772010-08-30T20:06:10.210-05:002010-08-30T20:06:10.210-05:00Wow - way to go on this. :)Wow - way to go on this. :)Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-3834337565638870902010-08-30T15:49:30.067-05:002010-08-30T15:49:30.067-05:00Was great to see a Beauty & The Beast entry. T...Was great to see a Beauty & The Beast entry. Twist was great, very fun.<br /><br /><a href="http://mesmerix.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Scribbler to Scribe</a>Stephanie Loréehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03512485557711771802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-80890820990882813602010-08-30T15:45:09.714-05:002010-08-30T15:45:09.714-05:00I dug it! I'm also now stalking your twitter, ...I dug it! I'm also now stalking your twitter, just because.Brad Jaegerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12672047492091058737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-86922056525991567932010-08-30T15:32:52.116-05:002010-08-30T15:32:52.116-05:00Good Luck, Jen! I really liked your story and what...Good Luck, Jen! I really liked your story and what a fun idea!Sondrae Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990517502363224333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-15980494267820165302010-08-30T15:31:11.450-05:002010-08-30T15:31:11.450-05:00What a beast!
I really enjoyed this, Jen. The fi...What a beast!<br /><br />I really enjoyed this, Jen. The first paragraph was lovely, and your take on the fairy tale had a nice twist.<br />I hope you win!Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-16294897643195489332010-08-30T14:59:17.897-05:002010-08-30T14:59:17.897-05:00Nice work!! Way better and grittier than Disney...Nice work!! Way better and grittier than Disney's Beauty & The Beast...If you write further on this please make sure that Belle kicks his ass ;pangelarenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13639436719051155045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-8153077851927793832010-08-30T14:58:23.931-05:002010-08-30T14:58:23.931-05:00Nice story. Creepy, engaging, fun. :)Nice story. Creepy, engaging, fun. :)Okiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-37013510538002979482010-08-30T14:07:32.443-05:002010-08-30T14:07:32.443-05:00a far more believeable ending than the original! ;...a far more believeable ending than the original! ;p<br /><br />I love it! And so scary... nice work, Jen~LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-79821025920769954282010-08-30T13:54:45.795-05:002010-08-30T13:54:45.795-05:00Hi,
Ha ha, much better fairy tale than the origin...Hi,<br /><br />Ha ha, much better fairy tale than the original. Sooo gritty, enough to scare kiddywinks to stay in bed and never get out to ask for another glass of water!<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-16855655877907425102010-08-30T13:47:49.700-05:002010-08-30T13:47:49.700-05:00Crazy. Now that beast I wouldn't want to go an...Crazy. Now that beast I wouldn't want to go anywhere near! All for a rose :( Beautifully told.Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-43518312201173346842010-08-30T13:15:47.030-05:002010-08-30T13:15:47.030-05:00Very nice. I love how you rewrote this, keeping t...Very nice. I love how you rewrote this, keeping the sisters around and also making it more of a thriller than a romance. Good luck with the entry!Amy Saiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00346366018143891761noreply@blogger.com