tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post9160069975827572951..comments2023-10-11T08:54:40.442-05:00Comments on Unedited: DL Hammons HIGH DRAMA BLOGFESTAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03667521490706435608noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-86527746712179106082010-08-11T03:57:04.390-05:002010-08-11T03:57:04.390-05:00Ends with such a cliffhanger....!Ends with such a cliffhanger....!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-56879691748726581052010-08-11T03:56:39.804-05:002010-08-11T03:56:39.804-05:00Ends with such a cliffhanger....!Ends with such a cliffhanger....!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-90360791123232840242010-08-09T03:03:28.320-05:002010-08-09T03:03:28.320-05:00great tension! Nice work, Jen :)
Lyn
W.I.P. It: A...great tension! Nice work, Jen :)<br /><br />Lyn<br /><a href="http://lyndaryoung.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">W.I.P. It: A Writer's Journey</a>Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-88924863137910879472010-08-08T23:47:21.754-05:002010-08-08T23:47:21.754-05:00Jen, as ever, your talent has left me with my jaw ...Jen, as ever, your talent has left me with my jaw open and waiting with wide eyes for the next bit. Dang cliffies. <br /><br />It was great Jen.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-16424077123893767532010-08-08T18:38:55.302-05:002010-08-08T18:38:55.302-05:00Great cliff hanger and the tension. I felt as if I...Great cliff hanger and the tension. I felt as if I was with her. Scary awesome!Terry Stonecrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726985400500572770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-18302569186327500022010-08-08T17:35:46.821-05:002010-08-08T17:35:46.821-05:00Excellent entry. Like the suspense and drama..:)Excellent entry. Like the suspense and drama..:)Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-76620993480948769042010-08-08T15:19:30.658-05:002010-08-08T15:19:30.658-05:00Good writing! I want to know what happens next. Th...Good writing! I want to know what happens next. This sounds like a good suspenseful story, James Patterson style.Julie Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06462386948229063576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-18563656514408468012010-08-08T14:59:03.176-05:002010-08-08T14:59:03.176-05:00I love reading all of DL's blog-friends' p...I love reading all of DL's blog-friends' posts! Nice job! Good action!Rosslyn Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11304732306399786236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-31219600364108564242010-08-08T14:53:20.877-05:002010-08-08T14:53:20.877-05:00You write with such tension; I couldn't stop r...You write with such tension; I couldn't stop reading. :]Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-51022220238204474742010-08-08T12:17:23.970-05:002010-08-08T12:17:23.970-05:00Thank you for your lovely comment. Like your blog!...Thank you for your lovely comment. Like your blog! Hope you will become a follower of my blog too?<br />xoxo<br /><br /><a href="http://theonlyfashionprincess.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">http://theonlyfashionprincess.blogspot.com</a>Rachella - flourishingfit.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457023998421785355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-44642572258052981642010-08-08T12:02:02.623-05:002010-08-08T12:02:02.623-05:00super great writing! I was totally holding my brea...super great writing! I was totally holding my breath when she screamed "take whatever you want just let me out!" So there. <br /><br />I'm so loving DL's fest. Next time I hope to have time to jump in and play, too! :o) these are so fun to read~LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-87391706051159128972010-08-08T11:03:53.830-05:002010-08-08T11:03:53.830-05:00Hooray for Blogfests!
Great piece, Jen. Love the...Hooray for Blogfests! <br /><br />Great piece, Jen. Love the tension!<br /><br />:o) Have a great, new week. :o)Jackeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03351019926958000627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-16675543633626996122010-08-08T08:06:48.805-05:002010-08-08T08:06:48.805-05:00Seriously spooky. But what happens next? :D Nic...Seriously spooky. But what happens next? :D Nice entry, Jen.j.leigh.baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12086576155269323425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-5469124487614964362010-08-08T00:48:53.804-05:002010-08-08T00:48:53.804-05:00LOL, DL you make an excellent point! This is clas...LOL, DL you make an excellent point! This is classic slasher material so of course I'm going to like it. Definitely drama. So she's dead, right? Spoiler?Angela McCallisterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10610798614001745001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-54930984807543987872010-08-07T23:05:21.177-05:002010-08-07T23:05:21.177-05:00Very tense and suspenseful. You did a great job h...Very tense and suspenseful. You did a great job highlighting an adrenaline-fueled situation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-18389756460248570112010-08-07T21:24:21.161-05:002010-08-07T21:24:21.161-05:00jen!!!
this was so good!
i loved how you ended it!...jen!!!<br />this was so good!<br />i loved how you ended it!<br />atta girl, keep us wanting more!<br />:)vic caswell https://www.blogger.com/profile/01218698236837610704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-39955922336301364392010-08-07T19:46:46.252-05:002010-08-07T19:46:46.252-05:00Oh, no! The last thing she remembers? Yikes! Of ge...Oh, no! The last thing she remembers? Yikes! Of geez, you've really got me worried for her. I love serial killer stories, this is so up my alley. <br /><br />Thanks for the scary bedtime reading ;-)<br /><br />—PortiaPortiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13435815819572442582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-43105442071242256082010-08-07T16:22:38.529-05:002010-08-07T16:22:38.529-05:00As others have said, great tension!!As others have said, great tension!!Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12526875813399934443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-90334715703542216182010-08-07T16:10:16.857-05:002010-08-07T16:10:16.857-05:00I loved the pace and action very much. This was t...I loved the pace and action very much. This was the kind of drama that hits folks on a viseral level. Someone in your house. Survival of said attack. I wanted to know why he was there.<br /><br />Might consider breaking up the paragraphs and dialogue for the eyes. But excellent entry!!!Nicole Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09605448429334684845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-47024872618938510452010-08-07T15:36:43.154-05:002010-08-07T15:36:43.154-05:00Owww... That is high drama!
JaiOwww... That is high drama!<br /><br />JaiJai Joshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858987106548357551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-68466812650542738602010-08-07T15:27:42.334-05:002010-08-07T15:27:42.334-05:00Great entry, Jen, really enjoyed reading it (even ...Great entry, Jen, really enjoyed reading it (even if it did make me slightly dizzy from forgetting to breathe for a second there ;) <br /><br />~bruFebruary Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01078037856070486022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-4310166625000428872010-08-07T15:10:17.522-05:002010-08-07T15:10:17.522-05:00My heart was pounding with hers - well done! :)My heart was pounding with hers - well done! :)Jemi Fraserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214408467456320167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-3630946012585718242010-08-07T14:03:46.310-05:002010-08-07T14:03:46.310-05:00Oh, a very scary situation, indeed. Nice job. You ...Oh, a very scary situation, indeed. Nice job. You switched to present tense half way through, not sure if you meant to do that.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing, Jen!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09687047513163296827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-50970113570571297522010-08-07T12:15:00.898-05:002010-08-07T12:15:00.898-05:00As everyone has said, there's great tension he...As everyone has said, there's great tension here. Great drama.<br /><br />I'm following your blog.Charles Forgueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699237849644235916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3122888753760790051.post-35393897548691351552010-08-07T12:12:43.251-05:002010-08-07T12:12:43.251-05:00the end of this one really begs for me to read mor...the end of this one really begs for me to read more. great post!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.com